The effects of an invention or innovation in modern life are extremely huge and broad. Invention or innovation in modern life has led to change people’s lifestyle a lot and bring convenience for humankind. By invention or innovation, communication with others as well as people’s paces become faster and faster. Furthermore, the world is passing into a global village gradually.
First, we are able to communicate with others not only fast but also wide. For instance, due to the invention of computers, we are capable of using e-mail to talk to foreign friends. We won’t be limited to both time and space. Nevertheless, we ought to be more careful because we cannot be sure that the information we obtain via the invention or innovation instead of contacting directly is true and correct. Some people may cover the truth about themselves.
Second, as competition has been more and more intense, we should train our own competitive power and even enhance our abilities. Because not merely technology but also information are developed more and more progressive, we ought to improve ourselves as soon as possible. For example, firms should integrate their internal sectors in order that they could save time for the purpose of delivering the goods to guests soon. That might help firms strengthen the customer satisfaction. Moreover, they are able to build a long-term relationship with their guests so as to maintain stable profits.
Finally, the world is becoming a global village. On account of the fact, we must trade with both local and foreign markets. We ought to master English to adapt ourselves to the external environment. Besides, we should esteem and tolerate different cultures, values and customs. How to reduce racial discrimination is an important issue to people all over the world.
The influences of an invention or innovation in modern life are unavoidable. It is the most primary for us to adjust ourselves in order to make the effects become our advantages.
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1.topic sentence:The effects of an invention or innovation in modern life are extremely huge and broad.
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second paragraph:we are able to communicate with others not only fast but also wide.
third paragraph:not merely technology but also information are developed more and more progressive, we ought to improve ourselves as soon as possible.
fourth paragraph:the world is becoming a global village. On account of the fact, we must trade with both local and foreign markets.
2.yes
3.各段的內容和各段的主題句相符，但似乎和第一段提到的部分關連較小
4.I think the examples are enough but a little bit too wide
5.I like the fourth paragraph because you mention that the world is becoming a global village and tell us what should we do!
6.已經介紹很多清楚的內容，可是我還想知道，如此快速發展的社會，會對我們的生活帶來什麼不同負面的影響呢?
7.I think the essay is good but not very interesting. maybe you can try to give us more real fact which close to our life.
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